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18 March 2006 @ 10:29 pm
[Naruto] 1sentence, PG, General, SasuNaru  
For 1sentence.

Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: SasuNaru
Theme set: Beta
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1741

True rivalry.Collapse )
Current Mood: pleased
Current Music: S.H.E. - 找不到
メルch_ar_me on April 23rd, 2006 02:16 pm (UTC)
I've never really been a fan of sasunaru (or even naruto in general, I just acknowledge the pairing) but damn girl you write so well :)

And damn, #35 nearly made me fall off my chair. ^____^
it's weird to have a vibrating cat on your head: hey nowmeiface on April 23rd, 2006 09:51 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you so much! Me, I am quite fond of SasuNaru. ::pets::
ametris on April 30th, 2006 01:59 am (UTC)
omfg that was amazing. *____*
{如果的事}fishingfor on April 30th, 2006 03:55 am (UTC)
Thank you! I love Sasuke and Naruto in such a special, lovely way.

((Now go to sleep! :D))
(no subject) - ametris on April 30th, 2006 03:59 am (UTC) (Expand)
whom the gods love dies young.: [bleach] rukia approvedvowel on September 4th, 2006 11:27 pm (UTC)
0____O ZOMG. Hah. First time I ever said that word.

LOVE. *is pwned by your awesomeness*
it's weird to have a vibrating cat on your head: whoremeiface on September 5th, 2006 02:52 am (UTC)
Wah, thanks so much! Sasuke and Naruto are not easy to work with when it comes to writing...or anything else, really. :/ Bastards. But I love them so, anyway. ::affectionate::
Sorahidden_eden on November 26th, 2006 04:25 pm (UTC)
Chuu, it just made me squee!

It was so beautifully written and it captured everyone's personalities. it's just amazing that you can bring out these emotions in the characters and in the reader without making over-jealous declarations of love. Nothing is too dramatic, but it leaves me breathless.

Plus, some of it was just too funny. ^-^
{如果的事}fishingfor on November 27th, 2006 04:40 am (UTC)
Thanks so much. :) Naruto and Sasuke are so complex; it's both fun and frustrating to write them, I think.
gonriegonrie on January 19th, 2007 07:17 pm (UTC)
That was just beautiful!
{如果的事}fishingfor on January 20th, 2007 04:10 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much. :)
(Anonymous) on January 27th, 2007 05:58 pm (UTC)
Hi!^^ I'm a Italian girl, but I can understand English quite well. I've read your fanfic and I loved it! It's beautiful! I would Italian SasuNaru fan to read it... Could I translate it in Italian tongue? I would be very happy if I could!
I know, my English is quite poor, but I think I can translate well.
You can contact me at asmesia@hotmail.it I hope for an answer!
{如果的事}fishingfor on January 28th, 2007 08:50 pm (UTC)
Wow, that's such a huge compliment! I'd be happy to let you translate it. Going to email you right now! :)
(Anonymous) on February 3rd, 2007 01:27 pm (UTC)
Hello^^. Some days passed, but I haven’t received an answer yet…
I have translated all sentences, but I need your help for some things that I can’t understand ._. (Sorry, it’s my first translation!)
I hope you’ll contact me, soon.
Bye, thank you very much for you patience!^^
chiisa_kisekichiisa_kiseki on February 20th, 2007 03:31 am (UTC)
Amazing. I think that's all that needs to be said.


You have condensed the most AMAZIng story into 50 sentances, and you did it perfectly XD I like 36 and 37 best.

Good job.
{如果的事}fishingfor on May 14th, 2007 04:18 pm (UTC)
Re: Wow.
Sorry for the ridiculously late reply, but thank you so much. I'm really glad that you liked it. :)
Re: Wow. - chiisa_kiseki on May 14th, 2007 07:16 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Billie: Chibi Kakashicontrol_paradox on June 26th, 2007 04:33 pm (UTC)
Oooh...major luff for this. ^.^
{如果的事}fishingfor on June 30th, 2007 12:36 am (UTC)
Glad you liked! :D
ricciolo on September 21st, 2007 02:04 am (UTC)
This is just the way I like to see Naruto and Sasuke: slightly painful and belligerent and also mildly tender (lol, if you could call them that ^^a) and caring. That's what always gets to me: how much they care (though at this point in the manga, I'd have to admit it seems Naruto's doing most of the caring...).

Anyway, I just wanted to mention a few of my favorites: 12, 16, 20, 25, 36, and 50. :D Thank you so much for writing this!
{如果的事}fishingfor on September 26th, 2007 04:07 am (UTC)
It's always interesting to see which numbers different people liked. :) I'm really glad that you enjoyed the fic because I typically don't write Naruto at all. Thank you for the lovely comment!
(Anonymous) on December 9th, 2007 05:37 pm (UTC)
Hi, I’m Asmesia. Many monthes ago I translated your fic after I had asked your permission.
I’ve published it, of course, but I’ve forgotten to link it here.
I’m very sorry!
It’s here: http://www.efpfanfic.net/viewstory.php?sid=120219&i=1
All the comments are positive^^.
I apologize, I’m so in late!
Bye, Asmesia.
it's weird to have a vibrating cat on your headmeiface on December 17th, 2007 05:34 pm (UTC)
Thank you for letting me know! :D
Hikkihikki_passion on January 10th, 2008 11:09 pm (UTC)
OMG, it took me a whole 10 min to get number 10. Yes, I have, in fact, died from shame.

Wow, I love their relationship, it's so real and so THEM! Thank you so much for writing them! And I love Ino. I would never look away either.

<3 x 1000000000000000000

P.S- HAHA, sasuke in a dress.
{如果的事}fishingfor on January 19th, 2008 10:23 pm (UTC)
Aww, I'm so glad you liked it! Thank for the awesome comment. :D
ablemouseablemouse on February 15th, 2008 08:50 am (UTC)

"Sasuke rolls his eyes at Naruto’s flaming face as Kakashi cheerfully explains to them the bond between a ninja and Mrs. Palm and her five daughters while on a long mission."

You own my soul for that one.

Fantastic fic.
it's weird to have a vibrating cat on your head: hikagomeiface on February 16th, 2008 03:17 am (UTC)
Glad you liked it! I'll always love the SasuNaru.
Little Girl Lost: Howl.aria_tristan on April 5th, 2008 04:17 pm (UTC)
I laughed, I cried, I smiled and I sighed. You write amazingly and you captured them perfectly.

Natural, stupidity, Sarcasm, Valiant and Nuance are simply gorgeous.
{如果的事}: beautiful dayfishingfor on April 6th, 2008 04:16 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so flattered that you like it. :) I kind of miss SasuNaru.
(no subject) - aria_tristan on April 6th, 2008 10:19 am (UTC) (Expand)
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it's weird to have a vibrating cat on your head: fangirlmeiface on March 23rd, 2009 03:16 am (UTC)
Thank you so much. :) I enjoyed writing this.