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18 March 2006 @ 10:29 pm
[Naruto] 1sentence, PG, General, SasuNaru  
For 1sentence.

Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: SasuNaru
Theme set: Beta
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1741

True rivalry.Collapse )
 
 
Current Mood: pleased
Current Music: S.H.E. - 找不到
 
 
Gloomy Gloogloomy_gloo on March 20th, 2006 03:52 am (UTC)
Cuteness! I love it! ♥
{如果的事}: friendsfishingfor on March 20th, 2006 03:59 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm happy to hear that. :D
Tasia, fools!thekatgrl on March 20th, 2006 04:22 am (UTC)
... I might die. This was brilliant. You got so much across with so little words. Absolutely amazing.
{如果的事}fishingfor on March 20th, 2006 04:25 am (UTC)
Ahhh, don't die! Though I am flattered. Thank you, I'm glad you liked the fic. ^^.
youji_yolayouji_yola on March 20th, 2006 05:49 am (UTC)
My God, that was beautiful, especially since you put all of those emotions different emotions in such a unique format.
{如果的事}: friendsfishingfor on March 20th, 2006 06:04 am (UTC)
I tried to convey what the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto entails: rivalry, friendship, support, doubts, and something more... Glad it seemed to come through. Thank you! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the fic.
darksecretloverdarksecretlover on March 20th, 2006 06:17 am (UTC)
ZOMG so good. T_T I miss you lots. XD But this is really good! Until next time! ^^
{如果的事}: peacefishingfor on March 20th, 2006 02:34 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Being on hiatus is sort of painful too because I keep thinking of things I could update with--then I tell myself: No, no, get off LJ and go do something productive with your time. But I figured I could make the time to post a fic. ^.^ Hopefully a FujiRyo will be up next.
Jen: Naruto: so canon it's scaryquickthorne on March 20th, 2006 06:25 am (UTC)
Oh, wow. *loves*
{如果的事}fishingfor on March 20th, 2006 02:35 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Ilanilandere123 on March 20th, 2006 08:04 am (UTC)
;__; ♥ It's beautiful!!
I really really enjoyed this. Usually I find these things a bit of a hassle to read, for some odd reason, but I just found myself really drawn to it! n__n ♥ Awesome job!!
{如果的事}: beautiful dayfishingfor on March 20th, 2006 02:43 pm (UTC)
I'm really flattered to hear that! Thanks for taking the time to read it. It was really interesting trying to write only a sentence for each theme and still making them connect but I'm happy that it seemed to turn out pretty well. :D
Alana _   Kittychansugercat on March 20th, 2006 08:58 am (UTC)
Awww Cute yet funny! ^_^
{如果的事}fishingfor on March 20th, 2006 03:00 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
(no subject) - sugercat on March 21st, 2006 08:13 am (UTC) (Expand)
( spamdog )sundialing on March 20th, 2006 09:47 am (UTC)
Really, really poignant. Way too many of them struck me to list, and in its entirety, you have perfectly summed up all facets of their relationship. In-character and everything; Sakura's role is the icing - way too many disregard her role as their closest friend. ♥ Beautiful!
{如果的事}fishingfor on March 20th, 2006 03:19 pm (UTC)
I'm honestly really happy to hear that as I haven't written much Naruto and it's encouraging to know that I didn't murder their characterizations, which is always a fear. ^^; Sakura is too-often disregarded in her importance but I personally think it's impossible to ignore her role in both Sasuke and Naruto's live. Thank you!
Rabbit Tanxiaobai7988 on March 20th, 2006 01:13 pm (UTC)
<3 Actually, I find it quite creative for you to use only a sentence to describe the various scenes. That is an impressive thing to do, cause it's not easy to portray everything in just one sentence.

*hearts* I love it~ :)
{如果的事}: hehfishingfor on March 20th, 2006 03:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you! It was a different approach to writing fic but I'm glad it worked. :D

(Your icon = too cute. ♥)
A. C.  Smithsmoking_panda on March 20th, 2006 09:09 pm (UTC)
*bows*

I worship your beautiful sentences....
{如果的事}fishingfor on March 20th, 2006 09:38 pm (UTC)
::laugh:: Wow, thanks! I'm glad you liked them so much.
bit_dreams on March 21st, 2006 03:20 am (UTC)
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE!! ♥♥♥♥
I particularly love 23, 45 and 48. 49 is great too. xD Though this entire thing is ♥!!!

Andandand, yay! only about 3 more weeks until the series is out of the filler arcs. =D I don't know if you follow the anime...
it's weird to have a vibrating cat on your head: sasunarumeiface on March 21st, 2006 04:24 am (UTC)
Eeee, thanks! ♥ Yay for SasuNaru.

GOD. FILLERS BE GONE. (I quit following the fillers. Real plot, come back!)
The Jenniführer: Naruto - Alonecephiedvariable on March 22nd, 2006 07:52 am (UTC)
Oh wow.

Well.

That was beautiful. ♥ I'm too tired to write anything coherent here, but I will add this to the list of recs in the ship_manifesto ^__^
{如果的事}fishingfor on March 22nd, 2006 07:20 pm (UTC)
Wow right back at you. Thank you so much, I'm really flattered. XD
Joey: openjoey_wheeler on March 23rd, 2006 07:02 am (UTC)
Flailed at you already....love you and yours so much for this. You've got a talent for terseness. ^^
it's weird to have a vibrating cat on your head: wifeymeiface on March 23rd, 2006 04:26 pm (UTC)
♥♥ I've missed this icon.
Alydhealydhe on March 31st, 2006 02:44 am (UTC)
49 is my absolute favorite. The way you write Sakura is the way I *love* to see her. Not whiny or obsessive, but intuitive and supporting of her boys. ^__^

And I've never seen SasuNaru written so in character before. Lovely.
{如果的事}: beautiful dayfishingfor on April 1st, 2006 01:41 am (UTC)
Sakura doesn't enough credit sometimes, but she's a very strong character, especially post-time skip. I'm glad you liked my portrayal of her! Thanks.
setsu_sujisetsu_suji on April 5th, 2006 11:33 am (UTC)
no OOC-ness.. i LOVE it.. absolutely brilliant.. everything is so true..
and i like how you wrote sakura.. because even though she's in love with sasuke, she's still, first and foremost, their friend.. and with that comes an understanding..

i love #'s 12, 16[whee~], 23, 25, 33, 45, and 50 [love how the way you said it]..^^

{如果的事}fishingfor on April 5th, 2006 07:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm happy to hear you liked the fic. :3 And, really, Sakura has grown a lot post-time-skip and it's arguable whether or not she still loves Sasuke with the same fierce 'infatuation' passion she used to. I think now she loves him like she loves Naruto: as very good friends, as treasured teammates. Sakura bastardization makes me cringe...